.............. Standing on the grey edge of a 50 story building, Jake started having second thoughts about jumping. The salty sweet rolled down his fave like rain drops, and his heart pounded like a drum.
"Man are you shure this is going to work, because I, I don't like falling to my death." Said Jake to Liam in a shivering voice.
"Well duh its going to work, stop being a cry baby. I specifically designed the boots to be able to carry a man your size without failure."
"What if there is a failure? WHat if it doesent start automatically? what if..."
"If theres not gonna be one. Besides if it doesent start automatically, it should start before you hit the 25th story." Liam's eyes were filled with excitement and hope that his rocket boots would work. His words were soothing and confident that his life's work would not come to a gruesome end. For months now Liam had ben telling Jake that he had finally found a way to create the first human super hero. Like Iron man he created boots that would give the rider stability, and control in the air and a safe landing.
"If you don't go I'll push you off."
"Id rather that maybe, bust then again... fine."
Taking three steps forward, jake looked down at the hard concert below.
"Well this is it."
"Think of it this way pal, if it works you the first human rocket."
"Yep the first human rocket. I can do this." Taking a deep breath in and clenching his eyes close jake jumped. Wind rushed passed as he fell, down and down. Then he felt a jolt, and the rush came to an end. Thinking I'm dead I'm dead. Then slowly opening his eyes he saw a seen of thousands of buildings in the sunset, and small ant like people down below.
"It worked it actually worked."
"I told you so."
2 comments:
I felt like I was there with this dialogue. It was descriptive and in depth.
This dialogue was so good. I felt like I was in the story and you could picture what was happening in the scene.
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